Sunday, June 23, 2013

The Real Lovers

The Real Ending~!!

Thursday was the given day of Paris and Juliet's wedding. Juliet asked Friar Lawrence for a bright idea on how to prevent their wedding. Friar Lawrence gave Juliet a potion. A potion which lets Juliet to die for forty hours. Juliet drank the potion on the night before their wedding. Friar Lawrence asked Friar John to send Romeo a letter which tells him the fake death of his beloved wife, Juliet. The Capulets saw the dead body of Juliet. They put Juliet's dead body to the place where dead Capulets were buried. Balthasar, Romeo's man saw that Juliet's dead body was being buried by the Capulets. And so, he immediately went to Romeo's place, Mantua, to tell Romeo what he saw. After hearing what Balthasar said, Romeo went back to Verona as fast as he could.  Paris went to the Capulet's tomb to put the flowers to Juliet's tomb, he hid himself to the dark when he heard a noise. He went to the place where Juliet's body lies, not knowing that Paris was there. He went closer to Juliet's tomb and he grieved. Paris saw Romeo and then they fought. Romeo then, killed Paris. He continued grieving and he decided to kill himself by drinking a poison. But before killing himself, he kissed Juliet for the last time. Friar John came to Friar Lawrence and said that he could not send Romeo the letter and gave it back to Friar Lawrence. Friar Lawrence went to Juliet's tomb. He was shocked after seeing Romeo and Paris' dead bodies. Juliet woke up. Friar Lawrence heard the watchers so he immediately left. Juliet grieved after seeing Romeo lying dead. She also decided to end her life. She first attempted to drink Romeo's poison, but the bottle is empty. So she kissed Romeo thinking that there is still poison on Romeo's lips but there's none. Juliet saw Romeo's dagger and she buried the dagger to herself which took her life. Prince Escalus, Montague, Capulet, Lady Capulet and the watchmen came. Lady Montague died because of extremely loneliness after what happened to Romeo. Friar Lawrence explained what really happened and he told the Tragic story of Romeo and Juliet. The feud between the two families ended. Then, they decided to make a statue of ROMEO and JULIET.






My Revised Ending~!!

Thursday was the given day of Paris and Juliet's wedding. Juliet asked Friar Lawrence for a bright idea on how to prevent their wedding. Friar Lawrence gave Juliet a potion. A potion which lets Juliet to die for forty hours. Juliet drank the potion on the night before their wedding. Friar Lawrence asked Friar John to send Romeo a letter which tells him the fake death of his beloved wife, Juliet. The Capulets saw the dead body of Juliet. They put Juliet's dead body to the place where dead Capulets were buried. Balthasar, Romeo's man saw that Juliet's dead body was being buried by the Capulets. And so, he immediately went to Romeo's place, Mantua, to tell Romeo what he saw. After hearing what Balthasar said, Romeo went back to Verona as fast as he could.  Paris went to the Capulet's tomb to put the flowers to Juliet's tomb, he hid himself to the dark when he heard a noise. He went to the place where Juliet's body lies, not knowing that Paris was there. He went closer to Juliet's tomb and he grieved. Paris saw Romeo, he asked Romeo the reason why he was there. Romeo explained all the things including his love for Juliet and their secret wedding. Paris believed what Romeo said. Paris went away. Romeo continued grieving, he thought of killing himself by drinking the poison which he bought from the poor pharmacist. He kissed Juliet's red lips for the last time. When he was about to drink the poison, he saw the movement of Juliet's finger. He was shocked when Juliet opened her beautiful eyes. Romeo hugged Juliet very tight. Juliet explained everything to Romeo. Friar Lawrence suddenly came because Friar John failed to send the letter to Romeo. And then the watchmen came with Prince Escalus, Montague, Lady Montague, Capulet and Lady Capulet. Romeo and Juliet explained everything to them. They agreed to the secret wedding of Romeo and Juliet. And then they married again. They had two kids, a girl and a boy. Paris married Rosaline, Paris and Romeo became best friends. And they live happily together with their two kids.



THE END~!!



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